Friday, December 7, 2012

G Block: Friday Classwork

Happy Friday, G Block. Your responses to the following directives are due by the end of class today (as a comment to this post).

1. Click here to visit a site that hosts a Learning Style Test. Take the test, honestly and carefully, and analyze the results (the colorful graph). Compose a paragraph that communicates the results (strengths, weaknessses, etc.) and your feelings regarding their accuracy and/or inaccuracy.

2. Visit Edline and open the documant named "Paragraph Revision." Correct the paragraph's grammar, punctuation, spelling, and formatting.

35 comments:

Colin Melo said...

I am more intrapersonal smart than anything else.my higher scores are in visual,interpersonal and naturalistic. I scored low in kinaesthetic,linguistic,logical and music.I feel that the results are pretty accurate.

Claudia Robert said...

In the Learning style test I got the following results: I got 25 in music smarts, I got 22 in picture smart, 20 in nature smart, 21 in body smart and word smart, I got 17 in number smart, 15 in people smart, and lastly 20 in myself smart. Overall I agree with it, like my people smart, I could definately work on it.

Anonymous said...

Kyra Bryant:
In the Learning Style Test, the results show that my greatest strengths is Interpersonal(people smart), my second greatest strengths all equal is Linguistic(word smart), Musical(music smart)and Naturalistic(nature smart. Then there is Logical(number smart),Intrapersonal (Myself smart) and Kineasthetic(body smart)coming into close strengths. As for my weakness, is only Visual/spatial (picture smart).

Scott Albert said...
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Scott Albert said...

I agree with the graph. I feel that I am as naturalistic smart as I am interpersonal, intrapersonal and body smart. I feel like I am little more logical smart then the graph said. On the other hand, I feel like I am less music smart. I think am as visually smart as the graph gave me.

Scott Albert said...

I agree with the graph. I feel that I am as naturalistic smart as I am interpersonal, intrapersonal and body smart. I feel like I am little more logical smart then the graph said. On the other hand, I feel like I am less music smart. I think am as visually smart as the graph gave me.

Anonymous said...

John Weeks

The strengths
1.Musical Smart
2.People Smart
3.Number Smart
4.Picture Smart
5.Nature Smart

The weaknesses
1.Body Smart
2.Word Smart
3.Myself Smart

I agree with what the survey is saying except myself smart. I am very musical smart, I play the piano.

Alex Carignan said...

In the graph, it was almost all wrong. I am defiantly not linguistic smart; I am not good at spelling or using a high vocabulary when I speak. Kaitlin says “Alex talks like Lennie from Of Mice And Men.” I believe that I am body smart, which means that I use my hands to learn, and I also use visuals when I learn, or need to look at something first. Also, I think that I am number smart though, even though the graph said I was not. I know I am not musical smart and I do not know nature that well.

-Alex Carignan

Alex Carignan said...

In the graph, it was almost all wrong. I am defiantly not linguistic smart; I am not good at spelling or using a high vocabulary when I speak. Kaitlin says “Alex talks like Lennie from Of Mice And Men.” I believe that I am body smart, which means that I use my hands to learn, and I also use visuals when I learn, or need to look at something first. Also, I think that I am number smart though, even though the graph said I was not. I know I am not musical smart and I do not know nature that well.

Parker Cleathero said...

On the Learning style test I was consider to be body smart and myself smart.

Parker Cleathero said...

Please correct the paragraph.


I walk in to English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.
I didn’t know what to do with it then he says, "This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job is to find and correct them.” I sit in my chair and fix the sentences, and there were a lot. I was wondering how is it that an English teacher could makes so many mistakes? Did this guy go to school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of literature I ever did see. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I founds some major; mechanical errors too. Some off the sentences was so messed up that I didn’t know where to begin. After a while it starts giving me a headache, I had never seen anything like this before! It was as if my teacher had been raised by a pack of wild animals! So as I am doing my work and I see out of the corner of my eye a shadow lurking behind me. So I look up, and there he is, Mr. Kefor staring right at me, eyes bugging out of his head. I say, “Why are you staring at me like that?” and he says “Are you working hard or hardly working?” I go back to work.

Gianna Larson said...

My feelings towards the learning styles test are accurate. My weaknesses were being music smart, and word smart. My strengths were body smart, nature smart, picture smart, myself smart, people smart, and number smart. I feel that some of what the graph said was inaccurate, but it was mostly accurate. The graph said that I was weak in word smart but I feel that I am word smart and I know a lot of powerful words. The weakest one I had out of all of them was music smart, and it is true because I don’t know that much about music. These are my strengths and weaknesses that were shown on my graph.

Kasara Maloney said...

After taking the learning style test, I have viewed my results and can't say whether I agree or disagree with them. I disagree with the Linguistic smarts result. I do think I have a much higher word smart then I was given by the test. I believe my music smart, being most of my intellect according to graph, was correct with the level of intelligence I obtain in music. I don't believe that the test can decipher my kinesthetic intellect based off of the questions provided, so I believe that the information provided through the graph in that section was inaccurate. My naturalistic intellect was accurate, saying I know some things about Nature. The graph said that I had a low logical intellect, which I agree with. I believe my visual intellect was an iffy result. I don't entirely disagree, it is mostly accurate, but I do think it should've been a little bit higher. I believe my interpersonal intellect was inaccurate, and I think that I know myself better than anyone else knows me. The graph had said that "myself smart" as it's called, was two spaces below being filled on the graph. I agree with my social skills being were accurate and that I am good with people. Overall I'm indecisive on whether the graph was accurate because I think that it was partially correct.

Anonymous said...

Lacey Bandecchi
I am more music smart than anything.


I walk in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.
I didn’t know what to do with it, and then he said “does this paragraph have many mistakes?” Your job is to find and correct them. I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I was wondering how an English teacher could make so many mistakes. Did this guy goes to school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of literature that I had ever read. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found some major mechanical errors too. Some off the sentences were so messed up that I didn’t know where to begin. After a while I started getting a headache.
It was as if my teacher was been raised by a pack of wild animals! So as I’m doing my work I saw out of the corner of my eye a shadow lurking beside me. So I look up and there he was staring write at me with his eyes bugging out of his head. I said why are you staring at me like that? He says are you working hard or are you hardly working? So I got back to work.

Jasmine hathaway said...

The results I got from the learning style test was very different than I thought it was going to be but I feel like its an okay thing. The results I have are that I'm in order from the highest to lowest are that I am interpersonal(people smart), intrapersonal(myself smart), linguistic(word smart), kinaesthetic(body smart), musical(music smart), naturalistic(nature smart), logical(number smart), and finally visual/spatial(picture smart). I feel this is close to what I really am but not completely true. I think if my friends saw this they wouldn't know if it's true or not. A computer will never completely know me because everyone is different from each other.

Lizzie Hanson said...

My feelings against the learning style test are surprising. I didn’t think I would do a good job because I when I think about the areas, I think differently. After taking this test it showed me what my weaknesses and strengths are of learning. I never knew that I was more Interpersonal smart than Intrapersonal smart. My top three strength of the learning style test were Kinaesthetic smart, Logical smart, and Interpersonal smart. My top three weaknesses are Linguistic smart, Musical smart, and intrapersonal smart. I never thought as myself to be like this after I took the learning style test.

Emily Eberle said...

My feelings about this learning style test are impressed. I am impressed because I did not think I would do as well as I did in some areas. This test showed my strengths and weaknesses in learning. My top strengths are Interpersonal smart, Intrapersonal, Naturalistic, and Kinaesthetic. My biggest weakness is Linguistic. I never knew this about myself until taking this test.

Anonymous said...

Tyreque Cabrer: Im pretty confident that the results from the test are correct. My higher scores were in musical, interpersonal,and intrapersonal. My lower scores were logical, naturalistic, visual/spatial, kinaesthetic, and linguistic. These results seem correct to me

Anonymous said...

Jake Burgess


I walk in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.

I didn’t know what to do with it. Then he says “This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job is to find and correct them.” I sit in my chair and fix them, and there was a lot. I was wondering how an English teacher could make so many mistakes. Did this guy go to school or did they hire him off the street? All’s I know is it was one of the worst pieces of Literature that I ever did see. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I founds some major mechanical‘s errors to. Sum of the sentences were so messed up that I didn’t know where to begin. After a while I start getting a headache. I haven’t ever seen nothing like this before! It was as if my teacher was raised by a pack of wild animals! So as I’m doing my work I seen out of the corner of my eye a shadow lurking behinds me. So I look up and there he is Mr. Kefor staring write at me, eyes bugging out of his head and everything. I say “why are you staring at me like that and he says are you working hard or hardly working?” I got to go back to work.

Anonymous said...

Kathleen Romano

My Strengths Are:
Logical: number smart
Interpersonal: people smart
Kinesthetic: Body smart
Musical: Music smart

My weaknesses are:
Naturalistic: Nature smart
Visual/Spatial: Picture smart
Linguistic: Word smart
Intrapersonal: Myself smart

My strengths are stronger in personal and social skills than intrapersonal skills. I’m more comfortable with numbers than with words. I’m better with people than myself because I talk more about people’s problems than my own.

Shamus Melchert said...

Please correct the paragraph.


I walk into the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.

I didn’t know what to do with it, then he says “This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job is to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I was

wondering how an English teacher could makes so many mistakes? Did this guy go to

school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of


Literature that I’ve ever seen. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found

a few major mechanical errors too. Some off the sentences was so messed up that I

didn’t know where to begin. After a while I started to get a headache like
never before! It was as if my teacher was raised by a pack of wild

animals! So as I’m doing my work, I saw out of the corner of my eye a shadow was lurking

behind me. So I looked up: and there he be: Mr. Kefor staring right at me, eyes budging out

of his head and everything. I said “Why are you staring at me like that?” and he said “Are you

you working hard or hardly working?” So I got back to work.

Colin Melo said...

colin mello
I walked in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gave me this piece of paper. I didn’t know what to do with it then he said “This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job is to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there were a lot. I was wondering how an English teacher could make so many mistakes? Did this guy go to school or did they hire him off the street? All I knew is it was one of the worst pieces of Literature that I’d ever saw. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found some major; mechanical errors two. Some of the sentences were so messed up that I didn’t know were to begin. After a while I started giving me a headache I have never seen anything like this before! It was as if my teacher has been raised by a pack of wild animals! So as I’m doing my work I saw out of the corner of my eye a shadow lurking behind me. So I looked up and there he was, Mr. Kefor staring right behind me, eyes bugging out of his head and everything. I said “why are you staring at me like that” and he said “are you workin hard or hardly working?” I got back to work.

Anonymous said...

Jack Ledbetter

I feel these results are pretty accurate. My highest score was Interpersonal. My higher scores were Intrapersonal, Visual/Spatial, and Kinaesthetic. My lower scores were Logical, Musical, Naturalistic, and Linguistic. I completely agree with these scores.

John Weeks said...

Please correct the paragraph.


I walk in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.

I didn’t know what to do with it then he says this paragraph has many mistakes. Your job

is to find and correct them.” I sit in my chair and fix them, and there was a lot. I was

wondering how an English teacher could makes so many mistakes. Did this guy goes to

school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of

literature that I’ve ever seen. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I founds

some major, mechanical errors two. Some of the sentences was so messed up that I

didn’t no where to begin. After a while I start getting a headache, I have never seen

nothing like this before! It was as if mine teacher was been raised by a pack of wild

animals! So as I’m doing my work I saw out of the corner of mine eye a shadows lurking

behinds me. So I look up: and there he is: Mr. Kefor staring right at me, eyes bulging out

of his head and everything. I say why are you staring at me like that and he says are you

working hard or hardly working? I got back to work.

kaitlin aucoin said...

Please correct the paragraph.


I walked in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gave me a piece of paper. I didn’t know what to do with it then Mr. Kefor said “this paragraph has many mistakes your job is to find the mistakes and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I was wondering how an English teacher could make so many mistakes. Did this guy go to school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of literature that I ever saw. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found some major mechanical errors too. Some of the sentences were so messed up that I didn’t know where to begin. After a while it started giving me a headache and I have never seen anything like this before! It was as if my teacher was raised by a pack of wild animals. So as I am doing my work I saw, out of the corner of mine eye, a shadow lurking behind me. So I looked up and there is Mr. Kefor staring right at me, eyes bugging out of his head and everything. I said why are you staring at me like that? Then he said are you working hard or hardly working? So I went back to work.

John Bacon said...


I walk in to the English class and Mr.Kefor gives me this piece of paper.
I didn’t know what to do with it then he says this paragraph has many mistakes. “Your job is to find and correct them.” He said. I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I was Wondering how an English teacher could makes so many mistakes. Did this guy go to School or did they hire him off the Street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of Literature that I ever saw. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found Some major; mechanical‘s errors to. Some of the sentences were so messed up that I didn’t know any where to begin. After awhile I start getting a headache-I have never seen anything like this before! It was as if my teacher was been raised by a pack of wild Animals! So as I’m doing my work I seen out of the corner of mine eye a shadow lurking behind me. So I look up: and there he is: Mr. Kefore staring right at me, eyes bugging out Of his head and everything. I say why are you staring at me like that and he says are you working hard or hardly working? I got back to work.

Alex Carignan said...

Alex Carignan

Please correct the paragraph.


I walked in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper. I didn’t no what two do with it then he said “This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job was to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I was wondering how an English teacher could make so many mistakes. Did this guy goes to
School or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of Literature that I have ever seen. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found some major mechanical errors, two of them. Sum off the sentences was so messed up that I didn’t know where to begin. After a while I started getting a headache I never seen nothing like this before! It was as if mine teacher was been raised by a pack of wild animals! So as I am doing my work I saw out of the corner of my eye, a shadow lurking behind me. So I looked up: and there he was, Mr. Kefor staring right at me. His eyes were bugging out of his head. I said “why are you staring at me like that.” He says “Are you working hard or hardly working?” Then I got back to work.

john baker said...

I am more of a musical learner then anything

Anonymous said...

kathleen gallahue


I dont agree with my results to say i am word smart but agree with my visual and not music samrt cause i am not good with music and never was

Anonymous said...

Jack Ledbetter

I walked in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gave me this sheet of paper.

I didn’t know what to do with it, then he says “this paragraph has many mistakes. Your job

is to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I was

wondering how an English teacher could makes so many mistakes? Did this guy go to

School or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of

Literature that I have ever seen. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found

some major; mechanical errors two of them. Some of the sentences were so messed up that I

didn’t know where to begin. After a while I started getting a headache-I have never seen

anything like this before! It was as if my teacher was raised by a pack of wild

animals! So as I’m doing my work I saw out of the corner of my eye shadows lurking

behind me. So I looked up: and there he be: Mr.Kefor staring right at me, eyes bugging out

of his head and everything. I said why are you staring at me like that and he says are you

working hard or hardly working? I got back to work

Claudia Robert said...

Please correct the paragraph.


I walk in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.
I didn't know what to do with it then he said “This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job is to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I wondered how an English teacher could makes so many mistakes? Did this guy go to school or did they hire him off the street? All I no is it was one of the worst piece of literature that I ever saw. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found some major, mechanical errors too. Some of the sentences were so messed up that I didn't know where to begin. After a while I started getting a headache, I have never seen anything like this before! It was as if my teacher had been raised by a pack of wild animals! So as I’m doing my work, I see out of the corner of my eye a shadow lurking behind me. So I look up, and there he is, Mr. Kefor staring right at me, with his eyes bugging out of his head and everything. So then I said "Why are you staring at me like that and he said "Are you working hard or hardly working?" Then I went back to work.

Emily Eberle said...


I walked into English class and Mr. Kefor gave me this piece of paper.

I didn’t know what to do with it, but then he said “This paragraph has many mistakes.

Your job is to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, there was

a lot. I was wondering how an English teacher could make so many mistakes. Did this

guy go to school or did they hire him off of the street? All I know is it was one of the

worst pieces of literature that I have ever seen. First, I found some obvious spelling

errors. Then I found some major mechanical errors too. Some of the sentences were so

messed up that I did not know where to begin. After a while I started getting a headache.

I have never seen anything like this before! It was as if my teacher had been raised by a

pack of wild animals! So as I’m doing my work out of the corner of my eye I saw a

shadow lurking behind me. So I looked up and there he was: Mr. Kefor staring right at

me, eyes bugging out of his head and everything. I said “Why are you staring at me like

that?” and he said, “Are you working hard or hardly working?” I got back to work.

Lizzie Hanson said...

Please correct the paragraph.


I walked into the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.
I didn’t know what to do with it then he said, “This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job is to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed the sentences, and there were a lot. I was wondering how an English teacher could make so many mistakes. Did this guy go to school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of literature that I ever saw. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I found some major; mechanical errors. Some of the sentences were so messed up that I didn’t know where to begin. After a while it started giving me a headache, I had never seen anything like that before! It was as if my teacher was been raised by a pack of wild animals! As I was doing my work, I saw out of the corner of my eye, a shadow lurking behind me. I looked up, and there he was, Mr. Kefor staring right at me, eyes bugging out of his head. I said, “Why are you staring at me like that?” And he said, “Are you working hard or hardly working?” I got back to work.

Anonymous said...

KathleenRomano
I walk in to the English class and Mr. Kefor gives me this piece of paper.

I didn’t know what to do with it then he says this paragraph has many mistakes. Your job

is to find and correct them.” I sit in my chair and fix them, and there was a lot. I was

wondering how an English teacher could makes so many mistakes. Did this guy goes to

school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of

literature that I’ve ever seen. First I found some obvious spelling errors. Then I founds

some major, mechanical errors two. Some of the sentences was so messed up that I

didn’t no where to begin. After a while I start getting a headache, I have never seen

nothing like this before! It was as if mine teacher was been raised by a pack of wild

animals! So as I’m doing my work I saw out of the corner of mine eye a shadows lurking

behinds me. So I look up: and there he is: Mr. Kefor staring right at me, eyes bulging out

of his head and everything. I say why are you staring at me like that and he says are you

working hard or hardly working? I got back to work.

Anonymous said...



Tyreque Cabrera:I walked into the English class, and Mr. Kefor gave me a piece of paper.

I didn’t know what to do with it then he said, “This paragraph has many mistakes. Your job

is to find and correct them.” I sat in my chair and fixed them, and there was a lot. I was

wondering how an English teacher could makes so many mistakes? Did this guy go to

school or did they hire him off the street? All I know is it was one of the worst pieces of

literature that I ever seen. First I founds some obvious spelling errors. Then I found

some major; mechanical’s errors too. Sum of the sentences were so messed up that I

didn’t know where to begin. After a wile I started getting a headache I have never seen

anything like this before! It was as if my teacher was raised by a pack of wild

animals! So as I’m doing my work I saw out of the corner of mine eye a shadow lurking

behind me. So I looked up, and there he was. Mr. Kefor staring right at me, eyes bugging out

of his head and everything. I said why are you staring at me like that? he said “are you

working hard or hardly working?” I got back to work